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55 words only!!!!
by mpb on March 21, 2008 02:49pm
here is sometrhing fun the rules are you write a story or somthing in 55 words exactly!!!! this "story" is supper short but has a meaning and makes sence it has a point it can be farsi or english doesnt matter I will start the first one

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by mpb on March 21, 2008 02:58pm

اگه يه كم منو دوست داشته باشي، چي مي‌شه؟

- آسمون مياد به زمين، زمين مي‌ره به آسمون. -

اَاَاَ…پس اگه منو خيلي دوست داشته باشي اونوقت چي مي‌شه؟

- اونموقع دنيا به كل نابود مي‌شه. -

 اُه…اينا رو جدي مي‌گي؟ يعني دوست داشتنِ من انقدر فجيعه؟!

خب اگه اينطوريه پس تو حق داري، من، بايد برم!



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by mpb on March 21, 2008 03:07pm

words words words words words words words words words words words words words words words words words words words words words words words words words words words words words words words words words words words words words words words words words words words words words words words words words words words words words words words

damn...mine is not very interesting.



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by mpb on March 21, 2008 04:03pm

Do we illiterate get a translation????



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by mpb on March 21, 2008 04:34pm

 

Iskandar, here's a word-for-word translation for you:

If he likes me a little bit, what will happen?
Will the sky come down to the ground and the ground go up to the sky –
Oooo… so if you really like me a lot then what will happen?
At the time, the world will become nothing (I think that’s what that line means...)
Eh… do you mean that seriously? So liking me is THAT bad
If it's like this then you have a right, I have to leave



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by mpb on March 21, 2008 04:39pm

I just want bang bang
I dont want relationship
I dont want to know your name
I dont want to meet your mom
I just want to bang bang bang

I dont want to talk to you
I just want bang bang bang
I dont want relationship I just want bang bang bang



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Donya
by mpb on March 21, 2008 05:20pm

tash a kor



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Hope poetry counts.....Night Visits
by mpb on March 21, 2008 05:24pm

As I lie in my dark and secret bed

Old blues notes running through my head

A shadow glides quietly thru the door

Eerily ghostlike across the cold wooden floor

Scarlet hair shining from the ebony silken gloom

Sweet lady aroma fills the silent darkened room



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Cyber Poker
by mpb on March 21, 2008 06:08pm

Torn from my grasp by invisible forces

and thrown into the cyber muck

returning late from a coffee break

I see Big Slick disappear,

Fuck!



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by mpb on March 22, 2008 12:06pm

nice every one

i will come up with one too

again soon :)

sorry I tend to write in farsy when I write

 



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by mpb on March 23, 2008 04:38pm

Don't be sorry.

Makes you twice as literate as I.

One of my failings in life is I have only learned one alphabet, and from the little I studied arabic alphabet it is precise where the roman on is not.

You should be happy you are that well educated.



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by mpb on March 23, 2008 04:44pm

Awoke one early morning twilight. My hotel room on the main street in Herat had a small balcony, and I sat on it and smoked a pipe of charas.

Beautiful, peaceful morning and a mountain lion came walking nonchalant down the center of the dirt street. About a  hundred yards behind were an afghan calvery troop, peacfully escorting it out of town.

An awsome moment in my memory.



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